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Monday, 12 August 2013

My DLO


Speech mark practice

WALT - use speech marks to show direct speaking.
 
‘What are your hobbies’ asked Jill.
‘Well’ said Jack ‘I like collecting model cars.’
‘How dull’ laughed Jill. Jack sulked and wouldn’t speak to Jill for the rest of the day .


‘What do you want to do when you grow up’ said John.
‘I don’t know’ replied ‘Dan I might be a pilot.’


‘What’s the time?’ asked Mark. ‘It’s 9 o’clock’ replied
Tom.




Wednesday, 7 August 2013

Jack and the Magic Harp .





130 Pt England Rd  
Point England
Auckland 1072




Dear Mum,Im sorry for selling your cow , and not getting your money next time i will sell it for money not  for a bee playing a harp im sorry if i wasted your money now we don't have anymore money i promise i would get the money back when I sell the cow .















Thank you
Jack




Tuesday, 6 August 2013

Three little pigs


:Once upon a time there were three little pigs  leaving to go  make there houses so they each said " Good bye mum " then they went off to get some staff for their houses .

The first pig wasn't that brainy so she went too the women/man who had some hay/straw and said “ Can I have some straws or hay? “ said the first little pig . She bought some  to  make her house .

Then the big bad wolf came and said “ little pig little pig let me in “ and the little pig said “ Not off my hair off my chinny chin chin “ so the wolf HUFFED and PUFFED and blew the house down and ate the first little pig .

Then the second little pig found a man with  some sticks and said “ I’ll need these to build my  house “ so the second little pig made his house out of sticks . The house was very strong .

The big bad wolf came again because he smelt bacon so he went down to the second little pigs and said the same thing  “ little pig little pig let me in “ and the second little pig said  “ Not off my hair off my chinny chin chin “ so the wolf HUFFED and  PUFFED and blew the house down and ate the second little pig and the had a very nice lunch .

The last pig was the brainy one so he found a man who had some bricks . He  went back and started to build his very strong house . The other pigs went into their big brothers house and stayed their cause it was safer , there it was also stronger than all the other pigs .

Suddenly the big bad wolf had smelt some meat so the went to go and find that last pig . He was walking down the street then the saw the last pig the said the same thing that he sold the other little stinky pigs  “ little pig little pig let me in “ the last pig said “ Not off my hair off my chinny chin chin “ so the wolf HUFFED and  PUFFED but the couldn't  blow his house down .

The big bad wolf had and idea to climb up onto the roof and went through the chimney but the last pig was brainy and put a pot full of boiling water and then the big bad wolf went down the chimney and went into the pot of boiling water .







THE END .

Thursday, 11 July 2013

Sentence mashup 2



WALT: Change the order of the words in sentences


make / people / laugh / when they are sad/ I
1.
When they are sad i make people laugh .
2.
I make people laugh when they are sad .




play / I / a musical instrument / in the evening
1
I played a musical instrument in the evening .
2
In the evening i played a musical instrument .




shy / not / when I meet / new people / I am
1
I am not shy when i meet new people
2
When i meet new people i am not shy .






my best friend / next to me / is sitting
1
My best friend is sitting next to me .
2
Sitting next to me is my best friend .


standing / is / behind me / My teacher
1
Standing behind me is my teacher .
2
My teacher is standing behind me .



Solar system / the eighth planet / is / Neptune / in our
1
Neptune is the eighth planet in our solar
system .
2
In our solar system neptune is the eighth
planet .





to London / go / I / want to
1
I want to go to london .  
2
London is where is wanna go





my favourite city / is / Auckland
1
My favourite city is Auckland
2
Auckland is my favourite city .

Wednesday, 10 July 2013

My Sentence mashup .

WALT: rearrange the order of words in a sentence.

1. She is in great form because  every week she goes to the gym .
2. Every week she goes to the gym so she is in great form.

1. I do not have time now because i cant talk to you .
2. I can't talk to you because I do not have time now .

1.  We are glad that we did not leave our umbrella .
2. We are glad that we did not leave our umbrella at home because the  
    other time it was raining and we didn't bring our umbrella .

1. I will miss him when he moves to Chicago .  
2. I will miss him when he moves to Chicago because I haven’t  seen him
for a while .