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Monday, 4 November 2013

The strange Whisper


On a rainy afternoon Jack and his dad went outside to check if any animals had been wet. The rain was so hard they couldn't get the sheep into the farm shed. As Jack we're taking the cows and the calves into shelter he heard a whisper saying ‘ DO NOT COME OVER HEAR ALL ELSE SOMETHING BAD IS GOING TO HAPPEN TO YOU ‘ .

Then Dad looked at jack ,  jack was frightened by this whisper sound he began to go closer and closer as the whisper sound kept on warning him not to go closer.Jack had recognized that whispering sound .

Jack ran to where the whisper sound was.When Jack was identifying the voice Dad was loading the sheep into the stock truck to turn into meat. Jack had call out to Dad to go with him to look for this familiar voice which was coming from  the farm shed .

Jack and Dad Ran to look who it was but the voice just disappeared But the person was still there. It was hiding behind the hay. As Dad looked over to see who it was.’ Its Uncle Benny ‘
Jack said he was surprised because Jack and his dad we're going to pick him up from the airport.‘ SURPRISE ‘ said Uncle Benny.Then Uncle Benny and jack and his Dad went home .

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