Byron Snowman

My Snowman

Cricket

This is a Presentation about  Cricket.  

Adding Detail To Sentences

Adding Detail To Sentences

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Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

When we went to camp Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen who helps us is our  coach on the confidence course.

                                             

                               

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course When we went to camp .

When we heard that we we're doing sailing  I was nervous about sailing on camp.

I was  nervous as we went by the sailing boats for sailing on camp.

           

I was nervous about sailing on camp because it was my first time .

When we finished sailing  we went abseiling.

we went on this challenging obstacle which was called abseiling.

we went abseiling When it was nice and sunny .

Our Year 6 Camp.

I like camp because you go to great places and next week were going camp at Kawau island .The activities that we a going to do is sailing,rock climbing ,swimming , Burma trailing , volleyball , and kayak .


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I Herd a Whisper.

Once upon a time there was a little girl named Taylar and she was walking through this dark forest. Then she heard a whisper saying “ Turn Around “ and Taylar was frightened by this horrifying sound.

Then suddenly she had reached her destination. Then the whispering sound was still going on and on. Taylar ran up to her tree house and didn't come down. As Taylar heard that someone was knocking on the door.

Taylar Had still didn't go to the door because she had thought that it wouldn't have been that strange sound again. She had looked outside the window and it was that sound she had tried to look and see who it was.

She had went down to see who it was and she had sawn the face and it was her big brother tom trying to scare her. She was very angry because she had thought that the sound that was talking was someone that wants to kill her.

To Be Continued .

Kiwis vs Cook Island.

On the kiwis first practise game. They versed the cook island at London , When kick off started they nearly got a 100 meter try but the cook island team had held them back but after half time the score was 38 - 0 to the kiwis and then on second half the kiwis just thrashed them by miles and at the end of the game the final score was 52 - 4 .

My Maths D.L.O

Comment if i got any wrong .

The strange Whisper

On a rainy afternoon Jack and his dad went outside to check if any animals had been wet. The rain was so hard they couldn't get the sheep into the farm shed. As Jack we're taking the cows and the calves into shelter he heard a whisper saying ‘ DO NOT COME OVER HEAR ALL ELSE SOMETHING BAD IS GOING TO HAPPEN TO YOU ‘ .

Then Dad looked at jack ,  jack was frightened by this whisper sound he began to go closer and closer as the whisper sound kept on warning him not to go closer.Jack had recognized that whispering sound .

Jack ran to where the whisper sound was.When Jack was identifying the voice Dad was loading the sheep into the stock truck to turn into meat. Jack had call out to Dad to go with him to look for this familiar voice which was coming from  the farm shed .

Jack and Dad Ran to look who it was but the voice just disappeared But the person was still there. It was hiding behind the hay. As Dad looked over to see who it was.’ Its Uncle Benny ‘

Jack said he was surprised because Jack and his dad we're going to pick him up from the airport.‘ SURPRISE ‘ said Uncle Benny.Then Uncle Benny and jack and his Dad went home .

The Accident

The Accident

One day their was this boy who was called sam the had one brother and one sister their names we're tom and sally they had a farm but not close to their house . But they'd always go there to check on their animals. Tom and sam always go there on there four wheelers they had a good time because tom takes care of the cows and sam takes care of the calfs.

Then suddenly as sam got off his four wheeler this tough horrifying bull was at the back of him. As sam was checking the calf’s the bull was getting furious at sam. Tom couldn't see because the was on the other side . Sam was afraid and horrified that the bull might do something aggressive to sam .

Then the bull  came crashing over the fence as tom saw the bull out of his paddock tom came racing back to the house so he could tell their dad to ring the police.As Tom weretrying too ring some people to come sam jumped on his fourwheeler but he forgot to close the calfs gate as one by one calfs we're going out .

Then Tom went back to check on Sam. Tom  he had seen the sam has been crushed by the four wheeler because the bull had runned over Sam.Tom went back to call the ambulance and told dad that the had crashed.Tom and dad went back to check if Sam had broken any bones but as the ambulance arrived they said that he has broken his leg and his ribs but that's all they said the has to stay in the hospital for at least a few years .

My Paragraph Rubric

The Impossible .

When it was a nice sunny Kelly was feeding her twins. As she was feeding her twins she heard this thunderous  sound heading towards them as kelly was trying to protect her twins. She couldn't hold them as she looked around she saw that it was a flood . SWISH SWISH it had wiped them out from the farm .

The next day Kelly and her children we're lucky to be alive because as they were looking around they saw dead farm animals. As farm animals we're floating around the twins we're very scared that couldn't have been them if it wasn't for their mom .

The next day they had heard a barking noise as Kelly looked over her shoulder she had seen a huntaway dog and his farmer. The farmer went back to his house to get something to pull them back.

After the farmer had sorted out the pigs . He took them back to his house and made a little paddock for the kelly and her pigs to stay in so they could keep comfy until the farmer could buy a farm .  

As the pigs we're i the paddock the farmer and his dog went out to see if there were  anymore animals that had  survived the flood .So the farmer could save them so they could have somewhere to stay .

Sally and the cheese .

This is my presentation about how to make cheese read it and you'll know how to make cheese

Kaitlyn's Big Day

On a sunny day , Kaitlyn was grazing  the green grass. Kaitlyn is a ewe that lives in a paddock at Avenel Station. She was happy that winter was over because her coat on her was the only thing to keep her warm.

As Kaitlyn was Grazing the green grass she heard this familiar Barking voice . When she looked over she had seen the horrible dogs that she's been afraid of  . Every time they come , Kaitlyn and  the sheep always know that something bad is going to happen to them .

When the dogs jumped off of the four wheeler the sheep began to run . As the sheep we're running the dogs chased them to the barn  where they gather up all the sheep . The sheep we're very frightened of the sheepdogs because they scared them .

As the sheep we're in the barn they were scared that something bad will happen to  them . But on the other hand the other sheep we're excited , because they all wanted to get their stinky hot wool off .

As the sheepdogs we're going to take the  sheep  too the shearing barn the sheep was horrified because the sheep were very frightened that something terrified will happen to them. As the sheep we're worried the sheepdogs we're climbing on them to lead them to  the shearing barn .

When the sheep we're scared they had to wait again ,  the sheepdogs we're scaring the sheep but the sheep we're very frightened because as they were waiting they had heard the RAZING SOUND they were very SCARED.

‘OH NO here comes the farmer , and he has a razor‘ They had been frightened as one by one had be sheared  . As the sheep we're getting shorn kaitlyn was terrified that the farmer might get rough on her when she gets sheared .

When they finished shearing, the ewes felt naked .Kaitlyn was excited to have that stinky hot wool off because it made her sweaty and stink . The other sheep we're very happy or excited .

At the end of the day all the ewes had and terrifying day but it turned out great at the end. Kaitlyn went back to the paddock and grazed through the tasty green grass . As the sheepdogs went back to the house . All the sheep including Kaitlyn we're very relieved that  their big day was over.

The Boy Who Cried Wolf

This is my rubric of my boy who cried wolf .

My Beauty and The Beast story

listen to ‘Byron Takaa B.A.T.B’ on Audioboo
listen to my beauty and the beast voice over

My Presentation Of The Boy Who Cried Wolf .

Byron Cross Country Run

WALT - Plan my recount carefully so I am clear about what I am writing and why .

How we were waiting .

When we finished lunch time we had to go in to our line where it says 10 year old boys. We had to wait for the little kids to go and do their Cross Country run and then we had to wait in the hot sunny day until we go called out and I said ‘ finally ‘ and then we went .

About how tired i was .

When we started I sprinted to the bottom of the field . After I got tired and started to slow down but as I went past the seniors people were cheering for me and I had are little giggle and then I started to sprint .

As I got halfway I got tired and started to walk then as I went pass Mr Marks I sprinted and then I overlapped Peh so and we started to go the same speed . But suddenly as I got to

the end me and Louis  had a race to  the end and I just beat him by a meter .



Racing someone

When I was running I saw Louis’s dad cheering and I knew that the was at the back of me. So i started to sprint and the was catching up to me and i tried my hardest , me and Louis nearly came a tie .

Rhyming Couplets .

I like going to the shop to by me a lollipop

When i came back from shops i stop .

On fathers day i made breakfast for my dad

The next day the was very very glad .

When i went out to ride my kite

As i was looking at my kite .

My fairy tale animation .

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Reading Interview

My DLO

Speech mark practice

WALT - use speech marks to show direct speaking.
 
‘What are your hobbies’ asked Jill.

‘Well’ said Jack ‘I like collecting model cars.’

‘How dull’ laughed Jill. Jack sulked and wouldn’t speak to Jill for the rest of the day .

‘What do you want to do when you grow up’ said John.

‘I don’t know’ replied ‘Dan I might be a pilot.’

‘What’s the time?’ asked Mark. ‘It’s 9 o’clock’ replied

Tom.

Jack and the Magic Harp .

130 Pt England Rd   Point England Auckland 1072 Dear Mum,Im sorry for selling your cow , and not getting your money next time i will sell it for money not  for a bee playing a harp im sorry if i wasted your money now we don't have anymore money i promise i would get the money back when I sell the cow . Thank you Jack

Three little pigs

:Once upon a time there were three little pigs  leaving to go  make there houses so they each said " Good bye mum " then they went off to get some staff for their houses .

The first pig wasn't that brainy so she went too the women/man who had some hay/straw and said “ Can I have some straws or hay? “ said the first little pig . She bought some  to  make her house .

Then the big bad wolf came and said “ little pig little pig let me in “ and the little pig said “ Not off my hair off my chinny chin chin “ so the wolf HUFFED and PUFFED and blew the house down and ate the first little pig .

Then the second little pig found a man with  some sticks and said “ I’ll need these to build my  house “ so the second little pig made his house out of sticks . The house was very strong .

The big bad wolf came again because he smelt bacon so he went down to the second little pigs and said the same thing  “ little pig little pig let me in “ and the second little pig said  “ Not off my hair off my chinny chin chin “ so the wolf HUFFED and  PUFFED and blew the house down and ate the second little pig and the had a very nice lunch .

The last pig was the brainy one so he found a man who had some bricks . He  went back and started to build his very strong house . The other pigs went into their big brothers house and stayed their cause it was safer , there it was also stronger than all the other pigs .

Suddenly the big bad wolf had smelt some meat so the went to go and find that last pig . He was walking down the street then the saw the last pig the said the same thing that he sold the other little stinky pigs  “ little pig little pig let me in “ the last pig said “ Not off my hair off my chinny chin chin “ so the wolf HUFFED and  PUFFED but the couldn't  blow his house down .

The big bad wolf had and idea to climb up onto the roof and went through the chimney but the last pig was brainy and put a pot full of boiling water and then the big bad wolf went down the chimney and went into the pot of boiling water .

THE END .

Sentence mashup 2

WALT: Change the order of the words in sentences

	make / people / laugh / when they are sad/ I
1.	When they are sad i make people laugh .
2.	I make people laugh when they are sad .

	play / I / a musical instrument / in the evening
1	I played a musical instrument in the evening .
2	In the evening i played a musical instrument .

	shy / not / when I meet / new people / I am
1	I am not shy when i meet new people
2	When i meet new people i am not shy .

	my best friend / next to me / is sitting
1	My best friend is sitting next to me .
2	Sitting next to me is my best friend .

	standing / is / behind me / My teacher
1	Standing behind me is my teacher .
2	My teacher is standing behind me .

	Solar system / the eighth planet / is / Neptune / in our
1	Neptune is the eighth planet in our solar system .
2	In our solar system neptune is the eighth planet .

	to London / go / I / want to
1	I want to go to london .
2	London is where is wanna go

	my favourite city / is / Auckland
1	My favourite city is Auckland
2	Auckland is my favourite city .

My Sentence mashup .

WALT: rearrange the order of words in a sentence.

1. She is in great form because  every week she goes to the gym .

2. Every week she goes to the gym so she is in great form.

1. I do not have time now because i cant talk to you .
2. I can't talk to you because I do not have time now .

1.  We are glad that we did not leave our umbrella .
2. We are glad that we did not leave our umbrella at home because the  
    other time it was raining and we didn't bring our umbrella .

1. I will miss him when he moves to Chicago .  

2. I will miss him when he moves to Chicago because I haven’t  seen him

for a while .